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How could you leave
Me all alone
On that cold stormy night?
Especially since
You were leaving
To go to that
Other girl.

I pined for you
When you were gone
But you never came back
Not once.

That other girl
Is clearly
More important
To you
Than I ever was.

You ran off
With her
To somplace
In Hawaii.

I met other
Guys
Who treated me
With Respect
I remarried of
Course.

And now
Sitting here on
My deathbed
I now have
The strength to say

"I'm over you
At last."
©2008-2009 ~carrotstickz
:iconcarrotstickz:

Author's Comments

I just wanted to vent some things, and then this happened.
It's my first attempt at anything ' poetic' so don't expect it to be great.

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:iconelement-of-random:
awww! poor girl, this isnt linked to you somehow, is it?!?
and, just wondering, why hawaii? lol

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:iconcarrotstickz:
Nope, it isn't.

Well,it's me venting random stuff,so I guess it could be?

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:iconcarrotstickz:
Haha,I did.
-flees to correct it-

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